--- 1/draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-signal-type-subregistry-04.txt	2016-03-17 21:16:51.332927087 -0700
+++ 2/draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-signal-type-subregistry-05.txt	2016-03-17 21:16:51.340927285 -0700
@@ -1,39 +1,39 @@
 CCAMP Working Group                                       Zafar Ali
 Internet Draft                                   Antonello Bonfanti
 Updates: 7139                                          Matt Hartley
 Intended status: Standards Track                      Cisco Systems
                                                            F. Zhang
                                                 Huawei Technologies
-Expires: September 10, 2016                          March 10, 2016
+Expires: September 17, 2016                          March 17, 2016
 
     IANA Allocation Procedures for OTN Signal Type Subregistry of
                the GMPLS Signaling Parameters Registry
-         draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-signal-type-subregistry-04.txt
+         draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-signal-type-subregistry-05.txt
 
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@@ -79,50 +79,50 @@
    Multi-Protocol Label Switching (GMPLS) Signaling Parameters"
    registry for the OTN signal defined in [RFC4328] and updated by
    [RFC7139]. This subregistry is defined to use only the Standards
    Action registration policy as defined by [RFC5226]. This
    document updates [RFC7139] to allow the "OTN Signal Type"
    subregistry to also support Specification Required policies, as
    defined in [RFC5226].
 
 2. Security Considerations
 
-   This document introduces no new security considerations to the
-   existing GMPLS signaling protocols.  Refer to [RFC7139] for
-   further details of the specific security measures.
+   This document does not introduce any new security considerations
+   to the existing GMPLS signaling protocols.  Refer to [RFC7139]
+   for further details of the specific security measures.
    Additionally, [RFC5920] provides an overview of security
    vulnerabilities and protection mechanisms for the GMPLS control
    plane.
 
 3. IANA Considerations
 
    IANA maintains the "OTN Signal Type" subregistry of the
    "Generalized Multi-Protocol Label Switching (GMPLS) Signaling
    Parameters" registry. The registry currently is defined to use
    the Standards Action registration policy as defined by
    [RFC5226].
 
    This document requests that the "OTN Signal Type" subregistry of
    the "Generalized Multi-Protocol Label Switching (GMPLS)
-   Signaling Parameters" registry be updated with the following
-   registration policies: "Standards Action" and "Specification
-   Required" as defined in [RFC5226].
+   Signaling Parameters" registry be updated with registration
+   policies of "Standards Action" for Standards Track documents,
+   and "Specification Required" for other documents.
 
    When needed, the Designated Expert shall be any current CCAMP WG
    chair or, in the case the group is no longer active, designated
    by the IESG.
 
 4. Acknowledgments
 
    The authors would like to thank Lou Berger, Deborah Brungard,
-   Daniele Ceccarelli, Adrian Farrel, Huub van Helvoort and Robert
-   Sparks for comments.
+   Daniele Ceccarelli, Adrian Farrel, Vijay Gurbani, Huub van
+   Helvoort, Barry Lieba and Robert Sparks for comments.
 
 5. References
 
 5.1. Normative References
 
     [RFC4328] Papadimitriou, D., Ed., "Generalized Multi-Protocol
              Label Switching (GMPLS) Signaling Extensions for G.709
              Optical Transport Networks Control", RFC 4328, January
              2006.