--- 1/draft-ietf-hokey-erp-aak-01.txt	2010-05-11 09:11:55.000000000 +0200
+++ 2/draft-ietf-hokey-erp-aak-02.txt	2010-05-11 09:11:55.000000000 +0200
@@ -1,24 +1,24 @@
 
 Network Working Group                                             Z. Cao
 Internet-Draft                                                   H. Deng
 Intended status: Standards Track                            China Mobile
-Expires: October 29, 2010                                        Y. Wang
+Expires: November 12, 2010                                       Y. Wang
                                                                    Q. Wu
                                            Huawei Technologies Co., Ltd.
                                                             G. Zorn, Ed.
                                                              Network Zen
-                                                          April 27, 2010
+                                                            May 11, 2010
 
 EAP Re-authentication Protocol Extensions for Authenticated Anticipatory
                             Keying (ERP/AAK)
-                      draft-ietf-hokey-erp-aak-01
+                      draft-ietf-hokey-erp-aak-02
 
 Abstract
 
    The Extensible Authentication Protocol (EAP) is a generic framework
    supporting multiple types of authentication methods.
 
    The EAP Re-authentication Protocol (ERP) specifies extensions to EAP
    and the EAP keying hierarchy to support an EAP method-independent
    protocol for efficient re-authentication between the peer and an EAP
    re-authentication server through any authenticator.
@@ -38,21 +38,21 @@
 
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    material or to cite them other than as "work in progress."
-   This Internet-Draft will expire on October 29, 2010.
+   This Internet-Draft will expire on November 12, 2010.
 
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@@ -69,21 +69,21 @@
      2.1.  Standards Language . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  3
      2.2.  Acronyms . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  3
    3.  ERP/AAK Overview . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  4
    4.  ERP/AAK Key Hierarchy  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  5
    5.  Packet and TLV Extension . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  6
      5.1.  EAP-Initiate/Re-auth-Start Packet Extension  . . . . . . .  6
      5.2.  EAP-Initiate/Re-auth Packet Extension  . . . . . . . . . .  7
      5.3.  EAP-Finish/Re-auth extension . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  9
      5.4.  TV/TLV and sub-TLV Attributes  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 11
    6.  Lower Layer Considerations . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 11
-   7.  AAA Transport Consideration  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 11
+   7.  AAA Transport Considerations . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 11
    8.  Security Considerations  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 11
    9.  IANA Considerations  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 12
    10. References . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 12
      10.1. Normative References . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 12
      10.2. Informative References . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 12
 
 1.  Introduction
 
    The Extensible Authentication Protocol (EAP) [RFC3748] is a generic
    framework supporting multiple types of authentication methods.  In
@@ -480,27 +480,27 @@
       TBD.
 
       pMSK Lifetime: This is a TV payload.  The type of this sub-TLV is
       TBD.
 
       List of Cryptosuites: This is a TLV payload.  The type of this
       sub-TLV is TBD.
 
 6.  Lower Layer Considerations
 
-   Similar to ERP, the lower layer specifications may need to be revised
-   to support ERP/AAK.  Refer to section 6 of [RFC5296] for additional
-   guidance.
+   Similar to ERP, some lower layer specifications may need to be
+   revised to support ERP/AAK; refer to section 6 of [RFC5296] for
+   additional guidance.
 
-7.  AAA Transport Consideration
+7.  AAA Transport Considerations
 
-   AAA transport of ERP/AAK message is the same as AAA transport of the
+   AAA transport of ERP/AAK messages is the same as AAA transport of the
    ERP message [RFC5296].  In addition, the document requires AAA
    transport of the ERP/AAK keying materials delivered by the ERP/AAK
    server to the CAP.  Hence, a new Diameter ERP/AAK application message
    should be specified to transport the keying materials.
 
 8.  Security Considerations
 
    TBD.
 
 9.  IANA Considerations
@@ -534,22 +534,22 @@
    [RFC5296]                      Narayanan, V. and L. Dondeti, "EAP
                                   Extensions for EAP Re-authentication
                                   Protocol (ERP)", RFC 5296,
                                   August 2008.
 
 10.2.  Informative References
 
    [I-D.ietf-dime-local-keytran]  Zorn, G., Wu, W., and V. Cakulev,
                                   "Diameter Attribute-Value Pairs for
                                   Cryptographic Key Transport",
-                                  draft-ietf-dime-local-keytran-02 (work
-                                  in progress), March 2010.
+                                  draft-ietf-dime-local-keytran-03 (work
+                                  in progress), May 2010.
 
    [RFC3588]                      Calhoun, P., Loughney, J., Guttman,
                                   E., Zorn, G., and J. Arkko, "Diameter
                                   Base Protocol", RFC 3588,
                                   September 2003.
 
    [RFC3748]                      Aboba, B., Blunk, L., Vollbrecht, J.,
                                   Carlson, J., and H. Levkowetz,
                                   "Extensible Authentication Protocol
                                   (EAP)", RFC 3748, June 2004.