--- 1/draft-lcap-mpls-moving-iana-registries-01.txt	2013-09-05 16:14:30.037381418 -0700
+++ 2/draft-lcap-mpls-moving-iana-registries-02.txt	2013-09-05 16:14:30.053381842 -0700
@@ -1,23 +1,23 @@
 
 Network Working Group                                       L. Andersson
 Internet-Draft                                                    Huawei
 Updates: 5586, 6374, 6378, 6427, 6428,                      C. Pignataro
 RFC-ietf-mpls-gach-adv,                                            Cisco
-RFC-ietf-mpls-tp-ethernet-addressing                     August 23, 2013
+RFC-ietf-mpls-tp-ethernet-addressing                     August 24, 2013
 (if approved)
 Intended status: Standards Track
-Expires: February 24, 2014
+Expires: February 25, 2014
 
   Moving Generic Associated Channel  (G-ACh) IANA registries to a new
                                 registry
-               draft-lcap-mpls-moving-iana-registries-01
+               draft-lcap-mpls-moving-iana-registries-02
 
 Abstract
 
    RFC 5586 generalized the applicability of the pseudowire Associated
    Channel Header (PW-ACH) into the Generic Associated Channel G-Ach.
    However, registries and allocations of G-ACh parameters had been
    distributed throughout different, sometimes unrelated, registries.
    This document coalesces these into a new "Generic Associated Channel
    (G-ACh)" registry under the "Multiprotocol Label Switching
    Architecture (MPLS)" heading.  This is an update to RFC 5586
@@ -35,21 +35,21 @@
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-   This Internet-Draft will expire on February 24, 2014.
+   This Internet-Draft will expire on February 25, 2014.
 
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@@ -58,21 +58,21 @@
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 Table of Contents
 
    1.  Introduction  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 3
    2.  IANA Considerations . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 3
      2.1.  Creation of a new Generic Associated Channel (G-ACh)
            IANA registry . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 3
      2.2.  Renaming the Pseudowire Associated Channel Types
-           registry  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 3
+           registry  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 4
      2.3.  Consolidating G-ACh registries  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 4
    3.  RFC Updates . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 5
    4.  Security Considerations . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 5
    5.  Acknowledgements  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 5
    6.  References  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 5
      6.1.  Normative References  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 5
      6.2.  Informative References  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 6
    Authors' Addresses  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 6
 
 1.  Introduction
@@ -100,20 +100,27 @@
    above are updated as indicated in Section 3; however the registries
    themselves are not changed (with the exception of one being renamed).
    They are moved unchanged to the new registry.
 
    Editor's note:
    Need to fix the references to RFC-ietf-mpls-gach-adv-08 and RFC-ietf-
    mpls-tp-ethernet-addressing-08
 
 2.  IANA Considerations
 
+   IANA is requested to add this document as a reference for any
+   registry that is moved or renamed as a result of actions requested by
+   this document.
+
+   IANA is also requested to replace all the relocated registries with
+   pointers to the new URL or with a redirect.
+
 2.1.  Creation of a new Generic Associated Channel (G-ACh) IANA registry
 
    IANA is requested to create a new "Generic Associated Channel
    (G-ACh)" registry under the "Multiprotocol Label Switching
    Architecture (MPLS)" heading.
 
 2.2.   Renaming the Pseudowire Associated Channel Types registry
 
    This document renames the "Pseudowire Associated Channel Types"
    [IANA-PWE3] into "MPLS Generalized Associated Channel (G-ACh) Types
@@ -184,21 +190,22 @@
    their content.  The reason to move them is to create on single place
    where it is possible to find all the G-ACh parameters.
 
 4.  Security Considerations
 
    The IANA instructions in this document do not directly introduce any
    new security issues.
 
 5.  Acknowledgements
 
-   To be added
+   The authors want to thank Amanda Barber for review and valuable
+   comments.
 
 6.  References
 
 6.1.  Normative References
 
    [I-D.ietf-mpls-gach-adv]
               Frost, D., Bryant, S., and M. Bocci, "MPLS Generic
               Associated Channel (G-ACh) Advertisement Protocol",
               draft-ietf-mpls-gach-adv-08 (work in progress), June 2013.