--- 1/draft-ietf-radext-delegated-prefix-04.txt	2006-10-19 22:12:43.000000000 +0200
+++ 2/draft-ietf-radext-delegated-prefix-05.txt	2006-10-19 22:12:43.000000000 +0200
@@ -1,18 +1,18 @@
 
 Network Working Group                                         J. Salowey
 Internet-Draft                                                  R. Droms
 Intended status: Standards Track                     Cisco Systems, Inc.
-Expires: April 13, 2007                                 October 10, 2006
+Expires: April 19, 2007                                 October 16, 2006
 
                  RADIUS Delegated-IPv6-Prefix Attribute
-               draft-ietf-radext-delegated-prefix-04.txt
+               draft-ietf-radext-delegated-prefix-05.txt
 
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@@ -23,21 +23,21 @@
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-   This Internet-Draft will expire on April 13, 2007.
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 Copyright Notice
 
    Copyright (C) The Internet Society (2006).
 
 Abstract
 
    This document defines a RADIUS (Remote Authentication Dial In User
    Service) attribute that carries an IPv6 prefix that is to be
    delegated to the user.  This attribute is usable within either RADIUS
@@ -48,21 +48,21 @@
    This document defines the Delegated-IPv6-Prefix attribute as a RADIUS
    [1] attribute that carries an IPv6 prefix to be delegated to the
    user, for use in the user's network.  For example, the prefix in a
    Delegated-IPv6-Prefix attribute can be delegated to another node
    through DHCP Prefix Delegation [2].
 
    The Delegated-IPv6-Prefix attribute can be used in DHCP Prefix
    Delegation between the delegating router and a RADIUS server, as
    illustrated in the following message sequence.
 
-  Requeting Router     Delegating Router                   RADIUS Server
+  Requesting Router    Delegating Router                   RADIUS Server
          |                     |                                 |
          |-Solicit------------>|                                 |
          |                     |-Request------------------------>|
          |                     |<--Accept(Delegated-IPv6-Prefix)-|
          |<--Advertise(Prefix)-|                                 |
          |-Request(Prefix)---->|                                 |
          |<--Reply(Prefix)-----|                                 |
          |                     |                                 |
                 DHCP PD                      RADIUS
 
@@ -170,21 +170,21 @@
    Diameter to AA-Request [6] or Diameter-EAP-Request [7].
 
    The text in this specification describing the applicability of the
    Delegated-IPv6-Prefix attribute for RADIUS Access-Accept applies in
    Diameter to AA-Answer or Diameter-EAP-Answer that indicates success.
 
    The text in this specification describing the applicability of the
    Delegated-IPv6-Prefix attribute for RADIUS Accounting-Request applies
    to Diameter Accounting-Request [6] as well.
 
-   The AVP flag rules [5] for the Delegate-IPv6-Prefix attribute are:
+   The AVP flag rules [5] for the Delegated-IPv6-Prefix attribute are:
 
                                       +---------------------+
                                       |    AVP Flag rules   |
                                       |----+-----+----+-----|----+
                      AVP              |    |     |SHLD| MUST|    |
      Attribute Name  Code  Value Type |MUST| MAY | NOT|  NOT|Encr|
      ---------------------------------|----+-----+----+-----|----|
      Delegated-IPv6- TBD   OctetString| M  |  P  |    |  V  | Y  |
        Prefix                         |    |     |    |     |    |
      ---------------------------------|----+-----+----+-----|----|
@@ -238,26 +238,32 @@
       flag rules for this attribute.
    o  Edited Section 1, to clarify the relationship between the
       Delegated-IPv6-Prefix and Framed-IPv6-Prefix attributes.
    o  Edited table of attributes and moved to a separate section.
 
    Revision -04 includes the following changes:
    o  Editorial changes in the AVP flag rules table
    o  Editorial changes in the description of the relationship between
       the Delegated-IPv6-Prefix and Framed-IPv6-Prefix attributes (last
       paragraph of section 1)
-   o  Editorical changes in the first paragraph of section 1 to clarify
+   o  Editorial changes in the first paragraph of section 1 to clarify
       that this document defines a new attribute not already defined in
       RFC 2865
    o  Added a text and a diagram to section 1 to illustrate the use of
       the Delegated-IPv6-Prefix attribute
 
+   Revision -05 includes the following changes:
+   o  Corrected the spelling of "Reqesting" to "Requesting" in section
+      1, Introduction
+   o  Corrected the spelling of "Delegate-IPv6-Prefix" to "Delegated-
+      IPv6-Prefix" in section 5, Diameter Consideration
+
 9.  References
 
 9.1.  Normative References
 
    [1]  Rigney, C., Willens, S., Rubens, A., and W. Simpson, "Remote
         Authentication Dial In User Service (RADIUS)", RFC 2865,
         June 2000.
 
    [2]  Troan, O. and R. Droms, "IPv6 Prefix Options for Dynamic Host
         Configuration Protocol (DHCP) version 6", RFC 3633,