--- 1/draft-ietf-radext-ip-port-radius-ext-01.txt	2014-12-12 06:52:27.324056902 -0800
+++ 2/draft-ietf-radext-ip-port-radius-ext-02.txt	2014-12-12 06:52:28.056074834 -0800
@@ -1,23 +1,23 @@
 
 Network Working Group                                           D. Cheng
 Internet-Draft                                                    Huawei
 Intended status: Standards Track                             J. Korhonen
-Expires: December 14, 2014                                      Broadcom
+Expires: June 15, 2015                                          Broadcom
                                                             M. Boucadair
                                                           France Telecom
                                                             S. Sivakumar
                                                            Cisco Systems
-                                                           June 12, 2014
+                                                       December 12, 2014
 
        RADIUS Extensions for IP Port Configuration and Reporting
-                draft-ietf-radext-ip-port-radius-ext-01
+                draft-ietf-radext-ip-port-radius-ext-02
 
 Abstract
 
    This document defines three new RADIUS attributes.  For devices that
    implementing IP port ranges, these attributes are used to communicate
    with a RADIUS server in order to configure and report TCP/UDP ports
    and ICMP identifiers, as well as mapping behavior for specific hosts.
    This mechanism can be used in various deployment scenarios such as
    CGN (Carrier Grade NAT), NAT64, Provider WLAN Gateway, etc.
 
@@ -38,21 +38,21 @@
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-   This Internet-Draft will expire on December 14, 2014.
+   This Internet-Draft will expire on June 15, 2015.
 
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@@ -229,20 +229,24 @@
 
    1.  IP-Port-Limit Attribute
 
    2.  IP-Port-Range Attribute
 
    3.  IP-Port-Forwarding-Map Attribute
 
    All these attributes are allocated from the RADIUS "Extended Type"
    code space per [RFC6929].
 
+   [Editor's notes - A comment was received on suggestion to map Radius
+   TLVs to IPFIX Elements whenever possible.  Authors are working on
+   details on this for the next revision.]
+
 3.1.  Extended Attributes for IP Ports
 
 3.1.1.  Extended-Type and IP-Port-Type TLV
 
    This section defines a new Extended-Type and an IP-Port-Type TLV (see
    Figure 1).
 
    The IP port type may be one of the following:
 
    o  TCP port, UDP port, and ICMP identifier
@@ -1476,22 +1480,22 @@
 
    [I-D.gundavelli-v6ops-community-wifi-svcs]
               Gundavelli, S., Grayson, M., Seite, P., and Y. Lee,
               "Service Provider Wi-Fi Services Over Residential
               Architectures", draft-gundavelli-v6ops-community-wifi-
               svcs-06 (work in progress), April 2013.
 
    [I-D.ietf-softwire-lw4over6]
               Cui, Y., Qiong, Q., Boucadair, M., Tsou, T., Lee, Y., and
               I. Farrer, "Lightweight 4over6: An Extension to the DS-
-              Lite Architecture", draft-ietf-softwire-lw4over6-10 (work
-              in progress), June 2014.
+              Lite Architecture", draft-ietf-softwire-lw4over6-13 (work
+              in progress), November 2014.
 
    [I-D.miles-behave-l2nat]
               Miles, D. and M. Townsley, "Layer2-Aware NAT", draft-
               miles-behave-l2nat-00 (work in progress), March 2009.
 
    [RFC3022]  Srisuresh, P. and K. Egevang, "Traditional IP Network
               Address Translator (Traditional NAT)", RFC 3022, January
               2001.
 
    [RFC6146]  Bagnulo, M., Matthews, P., and I. van Beijnum, "Stateful